You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the
following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The
new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and
further education will be something that continues throughout life.
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples
and relevant evidence.
Since the world has been changing, some people start to think that they need to acquire many jobs to adapt with work market. Vice versa, others feel that one main career is good enough. To me, as a person live in this modern life, I strongly support for the idea that people should not have only one method to make money for three specific reasons.
First of all, companies usually love to work with a multi-talent person because those people can have ability to handle many positions in their company. When other workers leave their firm, the boss can not hire another right away to cram this positions. That is the time for those people to show their power. It is undeniable that those people can not figure work out alone, they still need teamwork but it will be easier for them to accomplish a lot of types of work task.
Secondly, people who have known many ways of earning are not seem to fall in a broken situation usually. Life is varied, people would never know whether tomorrow what will happen. Is the job still belong to them? Therefore, if people have only and only one career, they will have no income when unfortunate contingency come. So preparing themselves with other skills is of the essence.
Lastly, the joyfulness of being useful is a great feeling that only them can experience. Possessing many talents make people more confident, helpful and enjoyable due to a great deal of things that they can be able to complete. Those people will have many different points of view when they face to an issue which appear in their life, in consequences, they will get the best way to puzzle things out.
To sum up, life is an unpredictable journey in which people should enrich not only knowledge but also endurance to get all the best experiences to this one-way trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...have known many ways of earning are not seem to fall in a broken situation usually. ...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ble to complete. Those people will have many different points of view when they face to an iss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65615141956 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29489576826 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.353515926 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133886978375 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045120557192 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406440872181 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866326241476 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262533985195 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.