Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
n modern society, we could not imagine our life without advertisement. The ad is everywhere, in the media, in the street, even in your personal devices such as computers and smartphones. It is argued that the advertisement is the reason for buying useless things. However, some people claim that AD can make their lives better by presenting the latest products. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints.
Many consider that advertisements encourage people to own unneeded items and the reason for this is a misrepresentation. Some businesses show their product as if we would not be able to live without it, or it will greatly simplify our lives, but it is not always true. Because of this propaganda buyer purchasing a variety of items, because they just believe - they are really needed, but in fact - they just want it. A recent study finds that 70 percent of unuseful things were consumed by AD impression.
On the other hand, there are some merits to ads. Promotional materials promote a lot of new useful products. Without advertisements, customers can do not know that the product exists in our world. Moreover, before purchasing a product we will be able to know about its characteristics and features. Furthermore, we will be aware of the price.
Taking all these points into consideration, the advertisement could be a reason to buy the product that we don't need because some statements in the ad could not be true. On the bright side, advertisement helps to familiarize with a selling material which is reasonable to buy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.984375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04957732804 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8717689262 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239190771479 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714232913415 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552478283778 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140380331484 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433701252534 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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