People who travel to another country to live work or study for a period of time often suffer from homesickness.
Why is this?
What are the best ways to reduce this problem?
Nowadays, people live abroad for the purpose of education and employment for a specific time which leads to homesickness. One of the main reasons for this is that individuals miss their family members, which actually can be eliminated by using online messengers.
It is undoubtedly true that each person feels comfortable with their close relatives. They can discuss their problems without any judgment. Moreover, only our parents and siblings can give us a bit of good advice, because they are only who takes care of us. Without them, while we are working or studying in different countries, we are suffering from homesickness. A recent study found that 7 out 10 people are experiencing a longing for one's home during a period of absence from it.
It is widely believed that online social platforms such as Telegram, Viber, and Facebook messenger can remove homesickness. We can chat with people from different parts of the world by using modern gadgets. Furthermore, the new technologies allow us to use video calls and it will cost us nothing because a lot of applications are free for the public. One of the research, which was published in Uzbek travel magazine states that online communication is an excellent way to deal with home nostalgia.
In conclusion, people suffer from homesickness when they are outside of the country for some time for an education or job, because they miss his or her family, and the best way to cut this problem is to use online communication applications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.028 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87785753643 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.568533369 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278511035121 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876113138398 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778329208126 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168578914618 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657924626374 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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