Dear Martha,
How are you doing? I hope you and your family are doing good. However, the purpose of this letter is to apprise you about the music concert held on 14 August at National Stadium. Additionally, almost all the musicians from the music industry are participating in this concert and performing live. I bought a ticket for this concert two weeks ago.
Recently, I have switched my job and now working for Pearl Media as a Project Manager. Unfortunately, I have to receive a delegation from Japan. Therefore, I will be travelling to the sites under construction with them because of this it is not possible to reach as I will be late for that evening.
Furthermore, I would like to offer you the ticket to avail this opportunity to see superstars performing live. Although, for your convenience, I can courier ticket or you can pick from home while passing by.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Truly,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81595092025 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78846335296 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656441717791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3453838747 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4166666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285992724218 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108089403437 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757325627783 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154208515729 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114612336225 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.