Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter :
- Explain why you are unhappy
-Request a refund
- Make an arrangement to return the damaged item
Hello Mr. Scott,
I am writing this letter to let you know that, recently I have purchased 1more Bluetooth headphone from your online store on the Amazon.ca website. I was extremely enthusiastic while I was purchasing this headphone. When I tried it I found some problem with it and want to complain about it also would like to return it.
Firstly, I am very fond of music and was willing to purchase new headphones, but with the current highly competitive market, I was bewildered chich should buy. Then I decided to buy your product and also I heard amazing good things about it on youtube as well as on your official site too. I got the courier before the delivery time. When I first tried it, it was not enough good sound quality I have expected while I placed an order online. Additionally, Bluetooth connectivity takes more than it should have to. It out my anticipation and not much happy with your product.
Amazon has given a good opportunity to their customer who wants to return the defective product back to the seller. I just checked it once and never used it afterward. So am planning to return the product as soon as possible and that how I could get a refund as quickly as possible. The site says that it would take 2-3 business days to refund money back to the same payment account, so it was a relief for me.
I requested amazon for the return of the product and they gave me a return barcode sticker, which I have to place outside of the box. I would put everything, whatever came with the Bluetooth headphones. Moreover, I have explained everything in detail on my amazon account about the product that's how it would be more helpful for future orders.
I hope you find this letter helpful and if you need any more detail about a damaged item then do not hesitate to contact me back on my cellphone +1(645)6151-4516.
Yours faithfully
Amit Savaliya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...it once and never used it afterward. So am planning to return the product as soon ...
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Line 9, column 291, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... on my amazon account about the product thats how it would be more helpful for future...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 336.0 206.0 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6130952381 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59668483048 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6082553537 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137744560509 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341148877796 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457522920663 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840550983362 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508956953814 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.