You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend.
Explain what the favor was.
Describe how this favor helped you.
Offer compensation.
Hi XYZ,
I am writing this letter to thank you a lot for filling my shoes when I was on my vacation in the last month. I would appreciate your contribution to the project work and being ready to accept the emergency project work, which has been done quite quickly with higher proficiency.
Since the beginning of the year, I planned to visit my parents in November for one week. On my vacation time, our company got a very important project from our customer and has to be done as quickly as possible. As a project manager, I had to finish it on time but you did a great job and took an opportunity to prove yourself extremely enthusiastic and interest in the work. I wouldn't forget your such a sort notice help while I was away on my leave.
You have done a great job and did head to toe to accomplish that project. As consequence, it helped our company to increase profit by 2% and also in the upcoming month our company is getting a big work order from the existing customer. Many companies are suffering from low work for their employees, while because of your hard work and project management skill, our organization would be working 24 hours all along.
When I got back from my vacation, I had a discussion with the management and other departments regarding the work you have done. They told me to raise your pay by 5%, but as we are friends for a long time, I requested to make you a project manager at the other plant with raised pay. That is a small favor I could do to you in return.
I heartily thank you for standing there in my absence and make it go through with all your effort. This act of yours made our friendship stronger than before. I can't wait to see your expression on your face hearing this good news about your promotion.
Yours lovingly,
Amit Savaliya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...nthusiastic and interest in the work. I wouldnt forget your such a sort notice help whi...
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Line 11, column 162, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... our friendship stronger than before. I cant wait to see your expression on your fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 331.0 206.0 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44108761329 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51276711901 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9325449285 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260508627253 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916542160794 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633109258831 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147990432036 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580575275977 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.