- shopping has become a new favourite past time for younger generation why is this case should we encourage them to develop other hobbies too?
In the contemporary world, youngsters have become shopaholics since they go for shopping in their leisure time. This essay will analyse the reason including modern lifestyle and amusements in subsequent paragraphs and argue that young people must be engaged in other activities.
To embark with, the foremost reason for impulsive buying by youth is materialistic thinking.They want to accumulate more since they always keen to buy latest products such as electronic gadgets outfits as well as cosmetics.Consequently, they prove themselves superior to their peers, which actually they want to do,and in turn waste not only their precious money on the goods,which actually they do not need,but also time in roaming. Apart from this many of them go for window shopping for the sake of entertainment.The reason being, they remain busy for weekdays in job or study or feel hectic by working from Dawn to Dusk. Eventually they feel themselves rejuvenated and and revitalize by coming in contact with luxuries.
Although shopping helps individuals to break the monotony of life, they must be motivated for the tasks ranging from exercises to helping needy. If they will perform certain physical activities like sports and yoga they will get inner peace, whereas through shopping they may be stressed on not getting a desirable product. In addition they can be encouraged for voluntary work because it would help to be to become social and independent and they would have sense of contentment. Therefore, they can lead a beautiful life ahead.
To conclude, undoubtedly new generation feel themselves entertained through shopping and they want to create psuedo reputation by buying imported items; however they must be insisted to perform physical activities and to work for the underprivileged people so that they can utilise their free time in real manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36394557823 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01107255238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.552756886 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.7 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122280850301 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585743472413 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472746272834 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913510351914 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273785957753 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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