A country's future depends on its young people.Tgerefore,it is argue tgat government should invest heavily in its youth.Do you agree or disagree.
It is undeniable that youngsters play a crucial role in futuristic development of a nation , and thus it is considered that enough investments should be made by higher authorities in them.This essay shall analyze the positives of this notion in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, the given approach is extremely beneficial to enhance the literacy rate in a country. The reason being, if more educational institutes will be opened for the young generation, in accordance with their interest, they would keen to study . Consequently , there will be large number of literate people in the upcoming years which is absolutely essential to compete on global level . For instance , Japan invested enough in teaching growing individuals after World war, owing to which , it has been leading other countries in intellectual development.
Moreover , focus on youth would lead to economic growth of a country .Since these masses would work in various fields for long run ,overall economy would escalate . In other words ,youngsters would be capable to pay taxes on account of their employment in different vocations provided by governing bodies .Eventually , the nation would not require funding from other economies of the world.To illustrate as per survey by Yale University , 70% of the persons contributing in budget of a territory are young people .
To conclude , Government must be a helping hand to raise the youth of its province in all terms as they are true assets who can secure the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24166666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91766800649 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.352682565 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.25 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100437491374 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038495807667 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383180149368 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623462829696 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393212209848 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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