Some High Schools require All students to wear school uniform other High Schools permit students to decide what to wear to school which of these two policies is better?
Wearing particular uniform is considered essential for the pupils in certain high schools, whereas in other such educational institutions students are allowed to wear clothes of their choice . While each individual has right to dress up according to their willingness, uniform must be a compulsion for schoolgoers owing to well-founded reasons.
To embark with, uniforms are vitally important to maintain equality among learners despite having any sort of discrimination on the basis of attires. The reason being, if tutees would wear whatever they want, inferiority Complex will be generated among impoverished and middle class students as they would not be able to afford branded clothes unlike their affluent classmates. Consequently, studies of such students will be affected, for they face psychological problems including depression. It is, therefore, necessary to have similar dress code for pupils in schools so that they would focus solely on learning.
Apart from this, to make children studying in schools disciplined, which is key to become successful,uniforms play and an indispensable role. Since one must follow rules and regulations at every stage of life, schoolgoers will definitely become habitual of this as they need to be in perfect dressing as per the instructions in their institutes. Eventually, they can flourish their upcoming years because in job market they would have to work under employers' restrictions Moreover, tutees will not be reluctant to go against their parents' policies.
In conclusion, although the students should be given sufficient freedom in other aspects, restrictions to wear uniform can prove to be profitable to promote equality and discipline
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62015503876 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12452796035 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3818636136 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1655113136 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676975934367 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623417368518 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104443049398 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318172432352 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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