More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes car and other items. What are the reasons ? Is it positive or negative development?
In the bygone era, people were unaware of brands, but nowadays their willingness of purchasing exclusive items ranging from outfits to cars have been increasing on a faster rate. The causes behind this trend are twofold, impact of Brand ambassador and to become superior. I personally opine this approach has enough ill-effects on society.
To embark with, the foremost reason of buying branded and expensive cars such as Audi and clothes including Gucci is to create an image of superiority complex and work as a status symbol. Since people who possess these are considered one of the most reputed persons in the society, they tend to purchase new items as soon as they are available in the market. Moreover, individuals who do not possess are neglected by others. Apart from this, in modern time majority of big companies advertise their products by involving movies and sports celebrities. The people get persuaded for the particular item endorsed by their favourite Stars, for the famous men and women have straight forward influence on their followers. For instance, as per survey by Yale university sales of brand Gucci have been escalated by 40% within two decades owing to the involvement of actors and sportsmen in endorsing this company.
Furthermore, health of people is being affected in order to fetch the branded equipments.The reason being, they work round the clock overlooking whether they are able to do so or not. In addition, sometimes they get stressed when desired things are not received even after relentless toil. Consequently, many of them suffer from physical as well as mental ailments, which would prove to be a barrier to lead a prosperous life.Secondly,weaker sections of the society may indulge in petty crimes because they would feel themselves inferior. Eventually, they will either engage in pick pocketing or shoplifting to purchase items related variety of brands. Therefore, crime rate may increase.
To conclude, although branded getting expensive cars has become a symbol of status and recognition among masses, detrimental effects on health and rise in crimes make purchasing such brands as negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28695652174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85899678802 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2461531803 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127321713189 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036525108901 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490817481071 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770639605232 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323005343718 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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