Nowadays the level of violence is increasing in video games and some tv programs. What are the reason behind this? What can be effects and solutions ?
Today’s era, the vast amount of inhumanity among video games and television sitcoms are escalating day by day. Due to these it has often influenced to children by various factors like their progenitors have lack of time to spend with offspring and trend of nuclear families to do ferocity which affects young ones to do criminal activities and stunts. There are uncountable complications and causes along with measures to tackle this obstacles.
There are several reasons of this prospective that why the level of ruthlessness are rising steadily among youngsters and the first is that today mothers and fathers have not enough time to use with their offspring because a lot of work pressure on them. Even though, guardians go outside for work to earn more money for their offer better future to children so they do not pay attention on activities and daily routine which performed by young ones. In addition to this, trend of small families are also responsible to grow violence in youngsters the reason is that there are the absence of grandparents among nuclear family. Furthermore,Forefathers which play crucial role into children’s development and guide them what is better for adults or not as well as give knowledge about cloture’s rituals and teach moral values. For example, A survey by media in 2018 reported that a least amount of inhumanity is finding among those youngsters who living in joint families and not children who living in small families are more aggressive and fully with ferocity.
Nevertheless, This hurdles have many causes which are perilous for young ones, progenitors as well as nations regions and staring with foremost effect, adults have imitate by their favourite stars and perform such stunts in life which are detrimental for them due to these sometimes they receive injuries to do these. The another cause is that young age are which periods when youngsters nature are more aggressive and they profoundly involved such inhumanity activities and enter in crime world as well as jobless adults due to lack of money can do robberies, kidnapping and etcetera criminals tasks. For instance, in 2018 in the Punjab a majority of young people who are under in unemployment become catching by drug - addiction so if they have lack of money than they start robberies and a group of adults from villages Bhambuan arrested by police because they stolen the motorcycle of someone and sold it for bought drugs.
Nonetheless, there are various solutions to solve this situation and an initial is that it is duty of progenitors to keep eagle eye on regular activities which doing by their children and consume some amount of time in their hectic schedule for offspring. Moving further, authorities should be fined those television programs which telecasts ruthlessness in their shows and banned because it is illegal. Apart from this, regime must be banned those games which made on ferocity themes and give punishment to games creators. For example, A show of Indian tv telecast on binds channel The rowdies banned by Indian government because in it sometimes contestants fight with each other’s.
In conclusion, although, a inhumanity are harmful for young one’s growth because it has many effects but if regime and guardians can take some necessary steps than it will be reduce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2795.0 1615.20841683 173% => OK
No of words: 544.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13786764706 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82240366728 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509191176471 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3295952992 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.6875 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121238319487 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438337399317 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369537730813 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071441567496 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311760068239 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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