Courses and general online study have recently become very popular. However, some people still prefer to attend classes in person. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is controvertible truth that the education system has transformed over couple of years. Due to technological growth, today we have option for online study or courses. However, few people opine otherwise.
Today, due to technology advancement, we have alternates to traditional classes like virtual classes or online course, study material. This has made convenient for many people to study from anywhere as they are unable to attend classes or study due to personal commitments. Online courses has also opened up a different avenue for people especially those who can’t afford to go to expensive colleges to study. To illustrate, In rural parts of India, many families are poor and requires financial aid to support their children’s education. Since the families can’t afford colleges, their children’s opt for online courses. The online courses are also very popular among working professionals as they need not attend physical classes and study or attend classes as per their convenience.
Conversely, there are people who follow old school method of attending classes in person. Attending classes with the fellow pupils are always memorable and end up making life long memories. Classroom studies also develops people skills and team bonding as people are asked to study in groups. Furthermore, in classes, learning are far superior to the online course as people engage in group discussions, share their experience and learning. Classroom learning undoubtedly enriches knowledge and experience. On the flip side, online courses only hosts the study material and has zero human interaction which makes the studies monotonous. A recent study proves that people who opt for online study and courses struggle with people management skills.
In my opinion, an ideal course should have an equilibrium between both online and classroom study. As, both the formats are helpful to people especially the ones who can’t attend all classroom classes.
To recapitulate, online course and study materials are gaining popularity, but at the same time the traditional classrooms aren’t getting outdated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60923076923 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89457194513 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7161929857 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9473684211 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32156134358 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101885701645 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661336287726 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167244937962 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610924896629 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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