Stress-related sicknesses have become increasingly prevalent. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress-related sicknesses including society pressures and poor life satisfaction. This essay will also suggest two main solutions to these problems including life style improvement and elevating one's self esteem.
Many people get exposed to a great deal of social pressures through out their lives. In addition, individuals are not as satisfied with their lives as they possibly should. Firstly, In this day and age there are a lot of expectations put forward by the society that we live in, people get extreme anxiety trying to live up to these expectations and they get caught in this bad atmosphere trying and often failing to please the people around them. Furthermore, some of these people do not end up following their dreams or doing the thing they love which inevitably leads them to being unhappy with their lives and unsatisfied with their current status. For example, Statistics reveal that young adults who settle for a safer choice of profession which provides a stable income as opposed to pursuing their hobbies are more vulnerable to poor life satisfaction. Therefore, there is a causal connection between mental and stress-related illnesses and the fore-mentioned problems.
In order to eradicate stress-related problems improving one's life style and building confidence and self esteem are important. Generally, maintaining a good life style by either doing exercises or having a healthy diet for example, have proven to be an excellent and successful solution to mitigate stress. Similarly, it is vital for people who suffer from such problems to boost their confidence as well as visiting therapy specialists to assist them in tolerating anxiety induced environments.
In conclusion, more people suffer from stress-related problems than ever before. There is a causal link between bad life style and poor self esteem with these problems. Consequently, in order to combat such issues; people should strongly consider incorporating good habits into their lives. Although stress and anxiety can be extremely painful, it is not impossible to suppress them and eradicate them for good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...icate stress-related problems improving ones life style and building confidence and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43895348837 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96923875528 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1290018061 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.9375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137020607946 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542384901212 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571047354997 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949901512243 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558958963776 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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