Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Howard,
Its been a long time we haven’t met and I so anxious in meeting you at the Dome Cinemas next week for the latest movie of the batman – “The batman and Gotham”. I am writing this letter to tell you that I may not be able to join you for the movie. I am very sad for not able to enjoy your company to watch this long-awaited flick.
I, recently, have met with an accident at the college library and had a small fracture in my ankle bones and my doctor insisted me to take bedrest till the wound is healed. I know you will be disappointed to cancel this plan, so I have thought of an alternative idea. my cousin, Ross, who met you at Junior High fund-raising event at UCLA college in California. I remember you guys met for 10 minutes and chatted long over the batman movies. He is coming to visit me in the next week, I am sure both of you would like to catch up after a long interval.
Once I am fit, I am hoping to see you soon at your college fest next month.
Yours Sincerely,
Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to watch this long-awaited flick. I, recently, have met with an accident at...
^
Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... take bedrest till the wound is healed. I know you will be disappointed to cancel...
^
Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... I have thought of an alternative idea. my cousin, Ross, who met you at Junior Hig...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26767676768 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42496306629 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7800174749 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176074317874 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794036221673 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047332849154 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120572135446 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308973200104 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.