Global tourism is significantly growing than ever before because of cheap flight charges, and thus many countries are providing opportunities to tourists. There are a couple of advantages of such a trend such as growth in the country's economy and an individual’s career. However, there are drawbacks that cannot be overlooked such as, terrorism. In my perspective, I profoundly believe that the disadvantages of tourism outweigh the advantages of such a tendency.
There are multifarious pros of tourism. To begin with, globalization has brought benefits to the world such as growth in the tourism industry, which indirectly helps in the development of the country’s economy. To elaborate, as the flight charges are reduced, many tourists are inclined to visit various countries to enjoy the beauties of the city, increase the vacation period, which ultimately leads to the growth in transportation, entertainment and accommodation industries. Recent demographics of India show that, due to tourism, the country’s value has increased, as 37 million visitors visited in the past 9 month’s period. Moreover, due to tourism, more working opportunities are opened to an individual which could be helpful in career growth.
Despite the above-said advantages, I believe that tourism has disadvantages associated, such as terrorism, which has become a global concern now. As the flight charges are reduced and people are allowed to enter the country for economic growth, the authorities overlook the people’s activities after entering the nation. This is because, every individual is given permission as a visitor, travels across the country and thus the terrorists take this advantage and attack the country. For instance, a recent terrorist attack in India is a live example to show how tourism has affected many people’s lives.
To conclude, even though there are many advantages of tourism such as the country’s economic and individual growth, I strongly believe that the terrorist attack, which is a concern now outweighs the advantages tourism brings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'advantages'' or 'advantage's'?
Suggestion: advantages'; advantage's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59433962264 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2701696187 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522012578616 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6419402088 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.071428571 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184987366023 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065208108798 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440926922855 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112694730483 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220442167592 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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