You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter
Explain what type of car you would like
Give details of when you would like the car
Request more information about the cost
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about renting a car at Nha Trang City.
In October 1st,2019, my family will have a travelling to Nha Trang and we will spend three days at there. We are considering to rent a family car which has seven seats and one car seat for baby, who is two years old. Besides, the car should have good air-conditioning and a shout track for leisure.In addition, I will drive by myself and I will give you my license when I come there.
I would be grateful if you could confirm a suitable vehicle and let us know the costs as soon as posible so we can get this arranged.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ditioning and a shout track for leisure.In addition, I will drive by myself and I ...
^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Your faithfully, Calla Balls.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 587.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 130.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51538461538 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52063671866 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723076923077 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 169.2 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6857508221 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253099121559 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100504257043 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561496146636 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14005322168 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347655900301 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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