Some people agree that children should ask for a parent's advice. Some Disagree. Discuss both views and share your own opinion.
Obtaining advice from the parent is debatable. It is often argued that children should consult the parent to take any decision while, some people have the opposite opinion. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and give evidence about why the parent’s advice is valuable.
To start with, advocates of obtaining parent’s advice argue that parents have experienced and lived through tough phases of life which enable them to think out of the box to give lucrative advice. It is generally believed that they will give advice considering kids ability to carry out the assigned task to them. A good example is that the Doctor won’t always give advice to his son to take admission in the medical field because he knows the capability of his son that he doesn’t have an aptitude to succeed in this field. A further reason is that children are not mature enough to take important decision independently including marriage, hence they need to approach their parents for guidance because they are a great resource and have a lot of life experience to share. For an instant, Einstein got the advice from his parent to marry someone who loves you more than you love her and make a decision together from the beginning as it shows respect for each other.
On the other hand, despite the above-mentioned viewpoints, people give equal justification against parent’s advice. Firstly, parents have a soft heart, so they always choose safety over risk while giving a piece of advice to their children. It is often claimed that over 80% of parents won’t allow their children to join the army because they don’t want to lose them, even though they have the credential to join the respectful institute of the county. Furthermore, it is sometimes said that technology has evolved rapidly nowadays, thus children to avoid taking advice to join a course because parents of old generation have no idea what the future of tomorrow. The only person that knows what is best for your children is your children.
In conclusion, I strongly support the idea that children should take guidance from their parents because they know the ins and outs of their children; therefore, they will give lucrative advice considering their strength and weaknesses to perform well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...g as it shows respect for each other. On the other hand, despite the above-men...
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...trength and weaknesses to perform well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07387862797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65166384387 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532981530343 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.829532222 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.357142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189251242972 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793175000149 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646006225028 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134541962342 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064955277146 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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