People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter describe the problems - explain how they are affecting people - say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter on behalf of the Model Town residence to convey our disappointment because of the poor internet connection in the area.
I would like to take into your kind consideration that people are facing various issues due to weak internet connection in the area. The most vital problem is that relatives of most families are living out of the county; therefore, they won’t be able to speak to their loved ones via Skype because of the problem mentioned above. Due to this, they usually visit internet clubs to speak to their kith and kin where they must pay a hefty amount which often increases their financial budget. Besides, It creates a problem for last year students who are living in the area to complete their assignments as they don’t have required speed of internet connection to research the information, hence they usually came late from universities where they spent extra time in the computer lab to finish the projects to give for final review.
I would like you to please assign a team of technicians to visit the area, and fix the problem without any further delay, so residence could get relief from the problems mentioned above.
I look forward to hearing a positive response.
Best Regards,
Haris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lief from the problems mentioned above. I look forward to hearing a positive res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98598130841 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57947734633 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9865581684 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.375 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225470647271 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788578194776 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474536534395 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987392427719 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711530265593 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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