Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believes that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people hold the opinion that awareness of competition must be encouraged among children. While other thinks, co-operation of children for becoming better adult is far beneficial as compare to teach them for competition. I, however, honestly consider uplifting the children for working together that eventually will be worthwhile for their adolescent time period.
Over the past few years numerous studies have consistently found by different countries that most of the people face number of worries at their early age owing to less concentrates or guidance from their seniors that actually becomes the reason of many hurdles in their professional career. Moreover, many intellectual people are concerned that competition of students always demonstrates the negativity as well creates stress in life which could be the cause of many diseases namely; blood pressure, sugar, anxiety and many other. Apart from this, many a time I have noticed that vast majority of seniors or parents are forcing their offspring for the competition, wherein children gets much pressure in school or colleges which is deeply flawed by guardians.
On the contrary, one of the obvious advantage of teaching co-operation especially to youngish people is to become good situation handler whether its relevant with education or in professional life. Many adepts assert that at such fragile age children must be given more intentions to develop their knowledge and skills that could be more helpful for them to take better decisions in life. More to add, we have been following the conventional trend in our society to deliberately enforce the people to do the things for the competition rather to mold into co-operation thinking.
All in all, in order to escalate the credibility of the people it's the responsibility of every person to spread the positivity and to be closed with helping hand among the country which will be more worthy for the country, nation and future generation as well. Moreover, according to the pedagogical experts it has number of positive consequences which will lead the country from bottom to top.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun concentrates is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...ely; blood pressure, sugar, anxiety and many other. Apart from this, many a time I have no...
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Line 13, column 64, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... escalate the credibility of the people its the responsibility of every person to s...
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Line 13, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsibility of every person to spread the positivity and to be closed with helping...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll lead the country from bottom to top.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31845238095 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83367720002 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4649361612 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.454545455 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202177620945 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874391094844 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622867333913 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129784079552 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715872368268 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.