Many people these days have computer, laptops, and telephones at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.
Nowadays, mostly people have different gadgets for working by home. While, I strongly believe that earning from home has many advantages but, it has many disadvantages as well.
In todays fast pace world, it can be seen that the world is moving swiftly towards the technology which is far beneficial for every individuals to learn and utilize the new invention of the current world. Furthermore, I would like to outline several advantages of using laptops, computers and mobile phones. Firstly, most of the women are earning money from home who has problems to go outside owing to internal family issues and any disability. Moreover, number of students is working for managing their pocket-money due to less support from their parents or inadequacy of money in families.
On the other hand, working from home has many adverse consequences that eventually make people's lives lazy which is not good for their health as well. Many adepts asset that teenagers have been addicted of money at their early age by doing work from home that ultimately will distract their mind from study. At last, these all experiences are not countable at their professional life especially for men.
To sum up, working from home is very useful way to earn money for those who are not eligible to go outside of the home but not to over look its advantages as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ry individuals to learn and utilize the new invention of the current world. Furthermore, I wo...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adepts'' or 'adept's'?
Suggestion: adepts'; adept's
...not good for their health as well. Many adepts asset that teenagers have been addicted...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot to over look its advantages as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, well, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55471067437 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8544581258 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425208621511 0.215688989381 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172080196613 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934155570602 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27883249357 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101641231589 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.