“Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?”
Nowadays, it has commonly seen that manifold people wants to look younger than their age due to job profession and living standards. I, however, believe that looking youthful is quite good for every one that actually gives intrinsic motivation to people to meet with every one confidently.
To commence with, this essay will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of looking more youthful for variety of reasons. Firstly, number of people believes that owing to some job professions people have to look more young alongside well dressed up for instance, marketing, sales, human resource, doctors and many other service industries wherein people meet with different high-profile mankind to present or represent their organization. Furthermore, small number of people is too much engaged with exercise to look smart and maintained their figures that actually demonstrate their look more youngish.
On the flipside, many survey adepts that rising trend of surgery has widely spread and become more common relatively past specially in adolescents which has number of adverse consequences, notwithstanding, people are moving swiftly towards the numerous type of surgeries namely; plastic surgery, hair surgery and many others. Many intellectual people say, natural things can never be replaced 100% through other things hence people need to be aware about this all things which can be the cause of devastation. Last but not the least; mostly people are doing very hard work as well as much careful pertaining to health and diet that's the only way to keep your body smart and young.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...h careful pertaining to health and diet thats the only way to keep your body smart an...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.372 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67689671075 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3901176931 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.875 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305967757456 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120618588802 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566616805987 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189032452919 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215733188375 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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