The first people we saw the moment when we open our eyes are our mothers and fathers. They are the one who tought us how to walk, eat, speak, share, learn, love and more. Besides, they keep teaching us many things from their routine in order to prepare us to life. Therefore, I agree with the statement that parents are the best teachers and I will explain my reasons in this essay.
Initially, we are dependent to them from the first minutes of our youngest times and they raise us with a great efford, love, sacrifice and interest. They are showing us the world and offering options to enlarge our perspectives and strengthen our minds. they tell us the memories and experiences they have to point out some significant facts and preserve our lives. Moreover, parents think their children before themselves because their kids are their major priority. Since they do everything without considering their benefits, I believe parents are the best and the most lovable teachers.
Second, other than life lessons, they teach us many important tasks and duties which must be done during the day in order to make the daily life easier. In my view, we are doing our daily internships with them and they are the one who responsible to teach the everyday routines. Furthermore, sometimes they require us to pay the bills, fees or rents and so on hence, they make us to learn these kinds of procedures. Otherwise, we might lose our self confidence and feel useless when we have to move or live apart from them.
Thirdly, their wise knowledge about many things makes us feel comfortable and calm because we would know that their power and support is always behind us to adultness. Also, sometimes they allow us to make mistakes and take risks in order to prepare us to dissappointments, heartbreaks and other taugh emotions. That is why, when we built a family we would know how to approach our family since we saw the best examples. Thus, this chain goes on this way and grows.
As a conclusion, parents are very valuable gifts to us and learning life lessons from them is uneffordable and wonderful feeling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, apart from, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74590163934 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51287853104 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4979964641 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737926070974 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031209937214 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554484662368 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479923631043 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251531142358 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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