Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past.
“The more we know about past the better we can be prepared for our future”-Roosevelt
The world that we spectacular today did not build in one day .Rather it has built with the tremendous effort and contributions from the people around the world. Time is now consider as money and people now is getting more and more busy with their lives. With the flow of time it is said that life is getting more complex . It is stated that the world today is significantly more complex and knowing the previous history and time people cannot make decisions today.In my opinion I strongly disagree with this fact for three reasons.
Firstly ,do human can be in this era of modernization without the contribution of the predecessor? In various field it can be seen that people are following their previous successor”s path because it makes their life easy and sustainable. For example, in scientific field we can get various examples. During the time of NIcolaous ,he predicted that the sun is the center of universe not the earth .As he was contradicting that times popular belief so he faced many hardships .But later after his death ,many centuries later Galileo invented telescope and proved this postulates regarding as true .Without following the showing path of Nicolaous ,Galileo might alone can not prove this .So, past is very important as it builds the foundation of the future .
Moreover,without past a person can never be better and prepared for his future.It is past which shows him which way is good ,which way should be followed and which way works for the best.Without analyzing past ,its like people fall in a large sea without any bank nearby to which route to follow .For example,a renowned lawyer had almost lost some hurdle cases because of some silly mistakes.Later on when his son chose the same path,he as a dad as well as renowned established lawyer taught his son some strategies which eventually helped his son to shine in his career.So, Past always indicates a certain way which helps people to finally reach his ultimate goal.
Futhermore,in decision making past definitely plays a significant role .If a person analyze some one”s biography and then evaluate the mistakes ,he can learn many things from it .For example , a doctor face many hardships keeping his family life stable .So ,his son or daughter knew from his dad”s history that they don’t want to be a doctor as long as it hinders the family life .As family is where people belong and where out heart is .So ,regarding making important decisions whether it is about career or something else ,analyzing past is big matter in order to achieve the targeted results.
However,there are some contradictions regarding the matter that past alone cant not help in decision making .Rather it jeopardize life to some extents.Well,indeed its true that the world is becoming more competitive ,and previous time and this times perspectives and contrasts would be different .Still past plays a very important role which paves the way more easily than knowing nothing .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2578.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04500978474 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86759106538 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528375733855 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.044584012 60.3974514979 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.363636364 118.986275619 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.4545454545 23.4991977007 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 5.21951772744 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 64.0 7.80617977528 820% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26940513802 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106426199437 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922700181053 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144581467363 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741825754601 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 14.1392134831 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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