Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
"A leader is the person who knows the way ,shows the way and goes the way"-John Maxwell
The recent world cannot be in this state without great leaders .A great leader can change the world with their wisdom, courage and compassionate which are recognized as universally moral qualities of men. It is stated in the above that governement should rely on their own judgement,than to serve the demand of the people.In my opinion,i strongly agree with this statement for three reasons.
Firstly , there are many obstacles a leader needs to face during his reign .There are some works which does not effect the public directly.It is a great leader who makes the path easy for its citizen with their subtle conscious .For example ,in 1971 the great leader Sheikh Muzibur Rahman awakened its citizen who were been exploitated by the West Pakistan Rulers. He told to protest the citizen against all odds and never given up.If he didnt think with his wisdom ,do really Bangladesh will get its Freedom after fighting for nine months Liberation War? That time he really didnt care about other opinion rather he made his own decision and for these the Bangladeshi people has achieved their freedom .So , a great leader should take his decision with his own judgement, if he thinks it only brings wellfare for the people of the country .
Secondly ,if a government officials listen all its citizen does he can mitigate all the demands of the citizen? A country is made of millions of peope and in a democaratic country people choose their own representative by election .And as it is known that democracy is for the people and by the people .For a leader ,it would be quite impossible to listen to all its citizen demand and fulfill one by one .For example ,one citizen thinks that the food budget should be adequated ,another think that health services should be improved ,is it possible for the leader to listen all of their demand and work for it at one time ? He should obviously listen to his own heart what should be the next plan for his country .
Thirdly , a leader becomes a leader in true sense when he is capable . And he is obviously a government offical with some moral qualities which he inherits with cirumstances . Such as honesty ,endurance ,foresightedness and so on .The citizen choose him by careful evaluation .So he is obviously capable to work for his country .In our world there are lots of great leaders who has taken instant decision in the crucial time which has saved the world at a great manner .For examaple Abul kalam Azad is one of the renowned leader who has given tremendous effort for its citizen .And he was known to be the most whimsical person who could took instant decission .So it is very important for a leader to be whimsical rather than be paralized with the demands of the citizens.
However ,people has some controversy regarding the fact that governement officials alone can not take decisions without the opinion of its citizen .If the country is in a wrong hand it will surely bring destruction for the country but not necessarily it is true for all capable leaders.A great leader can change the country in such a way no other human can do so .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2651.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76798561151 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52574123452 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456834532374 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.803150831 60.3974514979 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.916666667 118.986275619 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.3333333333 23.4991977007 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 61.0 7.80617977528 781% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12018658795 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635257818983 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427759169885 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719411926803 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458046879744 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 14.1392134831 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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