The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future.
The given diagrams elucidate information about existing plan of college in present and expected plan in 2020.
In general, in the perceive plan of college most of the space around the building will be utilized to create some new facilities.
As per the existing plan, building has some space at north ans west side of the building, which will be used to create more broader car parking and new facility like shop. Moreover, entrance of the college will be moved from north to south side of the building.
Furthermore, position of some of the places will be changed in proposed plan such as toilet will be shifted to south part of the building to north part.Similarly, reception will be made just entering to the entrance of the college. In the future college will have more classrooms as compared to now.
Overall, future plan of the college will have few modifications, which will utilize some of the unused space around the building.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , in
...d expected plan in 2020. In general,in the perceive plan of college most of th...
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...pected plan in 2020. In general,in the perceive plan of college most of the space aroun...
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Suggestion:
...g plan, building has some space at north ans west side of the building,which will...
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Suggestion: , which
... at north ans west side of the building,which will be used to create more broader car...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'broader' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: broader
...e building,which will be used to create more broader car parking and new facility like shop....
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Suggestion: Moreover
... car parking and new facility like shop.Moreover, entrance of the college will be moved ...
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Suggestion: some
...building. Furthermore, position of some of the places will be changed in proposed plan...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...outh part of the building to north part.Similarly,reception will be made just entering to...
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Suggestion: , reception
... of the building to north part.Similarly,reception will be made just entering to the entra...
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Suggestion: In
...entering to the entrance of the college.In the future college will have more class...
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Suggestion: , future
...ssrooms as compared to now. Overall,future plan of the college will have few modif...
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Suggestion: , which
... the college will have few modifications,which will utilize some of the unused space a...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ve few modifications,which will utilize some of the unused space around the building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, as to, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16233766234 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29402598427 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493506493506 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1726294812 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.23603664747 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209071152215 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150583646695 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725935774148 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150583646695 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725935774148 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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