In many countries women and men work full-time. It is therefore logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many places around the world, couples do full-time jobs which make them divide their household responsibilities. I firmly agree with the concept of managing house work collectively without any discrimination on the basis of gender. Although people consider that women are responsible of doing house work regardless of their work based routine, contribution of men with women can lower their burden.
It is pretty difficult job to manage a household particularly when female members are also working. In such cases, men should assist them to perform functions of their houses. When women contribute in bringing economic stability to their homes, then they should be given relaxation from these domestic tasks which is pretty fair. As per research conducted on the lifestyle of working couples, those households were better organised in which husbands were open to help and collaborate with their wives in carrying out house work while others were having bitter relationships with each other as well as messed-up homes. Therefore, instead of suffocating working wives and mothers with loads of house work, they should be provided a helping hand by male members of their families.
Many men especially south Asians believe that they are not supposed to do any household chore and women solely are bound to do this. This concept needs to be altered. A house requires an equal attention of husband and wife if the later one is also doing a full-time job. A woman can execute job work peacefully only when she gets relief from house job. She must not be treated through the angles of conventional cultural restrictions rather a man should be adaptive and flexible to modify his behavior as per the scenario. Thus, it would be insane if a man desires her wife to be as efficient in house work as in job assignments. Despite behaving recklessly, he should offer support to her by helping in chores.
To conclude, partnership is the key to chalk out a practical life when both partners are doing full-time jobs. By looking on to one partner and loading the one beyond ones capacities can result into detrimental effects on either married life or job. So, male members should take the responsibility of sharing household work in the same way as female members contribute in income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05013192612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7393301985 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5672823219 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0497150761 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208922841549 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668509626822 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675192123224 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139999667565 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066846827897 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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