You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter
Say where / when you went on holiday
Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday
Tell them what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Calla Balls, who is a guest booked a trip to Thailand in 27th of September at your company. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with this holiday.
Actually, I want to regret inform to you that your service was below my expectations. You said that we will receive the best services when we come Thailand. Unfortunately, even importantly we had to be at hotel, where is evaluated two stars instead of four stars as you said. For example, my room's equipment was so dirty and bad smell.
With all dissatisfactions I would like you discount 30 percent cost of the journey and give them back into my account. Please look into this matter as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a trip to Thailand in 27th of September at your company. I am writing to express...
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Line 13, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of the journey and give them back into my account. Please look into this matter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 654.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80882352941 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83068181108 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727941176471 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3202641046 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275448730362 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990562052444 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616456756343 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149851360203 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0089814259602 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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