Many countries are experiencing population growth and a need for more homes should these new homes be constructed in the exiting cities or should new towns be built for this purpose?
discuss and give your opinion?
It is true fact that, some country faces a problem of growing rate of population and ought to be that home scarcity situation as well. Thus, it is an intensive step towards the better society and environment is that to construct residence area should be in existing place rather than selecting new town, where all arguments will be explained in following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason to provide a shelter in living area is require less destruction of forest. Hence, it is the big contribution of the individual to healthy society. And, they can get sufficient clean gases which would be better for longer life. Secondly, it is easier for the users to settle to settle down in urban provinces, where they may live comfortable life owing to every short of facilities are available in nearby places.
Furthermore, new locators need to less money to develop new colony or city in the exiting places having others people are there. Means, other processing charge would bee diminish and transport cost as well, because most of the factories are located in the city area. For instance, in Gujarat region a GIFT city is developing at a booming rate in Gandhinagar city. Which can never be impacted huge on the natural habitat and non-human living beings. And it is developed in shorter span.
On the other hand, some individual prefers to live in new town which is far from the city. As they are looking for the pollution free environment. Which is now become one of the big concern for the society. In addition, people may get less noisy area that everyone looks in here and there. But, to stay in a rural area can cause a problem of wild animal attack on human beings. Due to lack of natural land is available for them to live, so they may enter in the residential area to looking for a food.
By the way of conclusion, all new developments should be taken out in the nearby of living area can be beneficial for both the community and natural habitat rather to live in new town which has lack of modern facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... to provide a shelter in living area is require less destruction of forest. Hence, it i...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to settle'.
Suggestion: to settle
...e. Secondly, it is easier for the users to settle to settle down in urban provinces, where they may...
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Line 13, column 495, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
... in the residential area to looking for a food. By the way of conclusion, all new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in short, by the way, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70670391061 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54924501902 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8858834347 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256902498294 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697303274902 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649665700663 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152306753792 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655077794874 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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