Dear Sir or Madam,
Manager
Khosla Electronics,
I am writing this letter to drawn your attention to an advertisement about one of your product recently launched to one of the leading National Magazine named India today. The advertisement was extremely attractive and offered a LED Television which supports the vast technology and HD channels with 20% discounts. I was excited to buy the product and showed the same advertisement posted in that magazine to my parents.
Later in the evening , we have been to one of your closest branch to buy the product. I was really happy to watch such fancy HD channels. My mom and dad still love to watch their daily series , daily news and some of the regional channels in HD.
Later in the night , I tried to connect my Television with Netflix via wifi so that i can relax myself watching my favourite movies. However TV was not supporting wifi, Netflix or youtube etc. I got really pissed off by the product.
I have visited the purchased branch. One of your human agent has declared verbally to me that there are no such facilities available in the Television which i have bought. It's just support HD channels. The information given in the magazine was wrong.
I would request you to publish the right information to any magazines or news papers to save the brand reputation. and to get the customer's trust on your products.
Many Thanks,
Shahin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d still love to watch their daily series , daily news and some of the regional cha...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...tch their daily series , daily news and some of the regional channels in HD. Later in the ...
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Line 8, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onal channels in HD. Later in the night , I tried to connect my Television with N...
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Line 8, column 85, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...elevision with Netflix via wifi so that i can relax myself watching my favourite ...
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Line 8, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ax myself watching my favourite movies. However TV was not supporting wifi, Netflix or ...
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Line 12, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83817427386 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69672131148 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609958506224 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0724740332 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.875 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171107787361 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466800645099 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569963537003 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826533301963 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727809629965 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.