Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, Regrettably I had lost one of my precious item in Howrah Express Train which arrives every night by 11:00 pm from Howrah station.I travelled from Kolkata to Delhi in the coach number A6 and my seat number was 11. In the morning, I started packing all the open stuffs of mine when Delhi station was close.However, I could not find my laptop bag.
Although, I have put all my best efforts to find my mislaid bag.I searched my bag in the entire compartment and asked my co-passenger at that time.However, failed to collect a single information from anyone.I was travelling to Delhi for a Ted Talk and all the secure data related to my company is available in that laptop.I am imagining that if my laptop goes to someone’s bad hands.Then I may lose my job on Risk and Compliance ground, which makes me more frightened.
Therefore, a humble and a kind request from my end is, would you mind sending a Research team to have quick search for my missing bag.I would really appreciate the generous action taken by the department.
Please contact me at 1234567890 once your team will succeed to find the item.
Many Thanks,
Shahin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...y night by 11:00 pm from Howrah station.I travelled from Kolkata to Delhi in the ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...fs of mine when Delhi station was close.However, I could not find my laptop bag. Alt...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ver, I could not find my laptop bag. Although, I have put all my best efforts to find...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... my best efforts to find my mislaid bag.I searched my bag in the entire compartme...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... and asked my co-passenger at that time.However, failed to collect a single information...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ollect a single information from anyone.I was travelling to Delhi for a Ted Talk ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... my company is available in that laptop.I am imagining that if my laptop goes to ...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...y company is available in that laptop.I am imagining that if my laptop goes to someone'...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...laptop goes to someone's bad hands.Then I may lose my job on Risk and Complianc...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...to have quick search for my missing bag.I would really appreciate the generous ac...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucceed to find the item. Many Thanks, Shahin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72169811321 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71830336668 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.310953368 44.8134815571 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.833333333 76.5299724578 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 16.8248392259 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119365875866 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609488008905 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525080518431 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832878426935 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429278182023 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 8.37731958763 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.