e-commerce has become common all around the world in recent times. Despite online shopping has innumerable benefits for people and companies, it also have some downsides. This essay will examine them in detail.
On the on the hand, e-commerce can bring many positive impacts on people’s lives and companies. Time efficiency is one of the primary advantages of it. People can purchase many must have products on the internet in five minutes thus they do not need to browse in shopping malls in long hours. Especially working mothers who have nine to five jobs can purchase vegetables and fruits at breaks which will make their lives easy and enjoyable. Further and more importantly, it is environment friendly. If the number of people who does shopping online rises, investors and authorities do not need to construct more shopping centres which were generally built on forest after innumerable trees had been logged. Consequently, companies will not damage environment unconsciously.
On the other hand, e-commerce can lead to countless detrimental phenomena. One of the primary drawbacks is that it will result in high unemployment in many places. According to an article form Business World Magazine in 2019, more than eight million people have been working on retail industry in Kena. Shopping malls will become obsolete with the introduction of intuitive commerce applications thus many employees will have been made redundant given the fact that retail companies will not need shop assistants and cashiers in the near future. Consequently, many workers will be unemployed due to this development.
By way of conclusion, the number of consumers who do online shopping has risen exponentially in recent times. Although it has some limitations, I would argue that downsides of it are eclipsed by benefits.
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...wnsides of it are eclipsed by benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89674912245 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0284248383 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3529411765 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129883073167 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372928253645 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406214433043 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759807036917 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283714613896 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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