Some people become famous at young age. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
Name and fame at very young age might be a positive step for promising future. However, same can turn life of a person into chaos if not guided properly. Let's discuss various advantages and disadvantages that popularity in childhood might bring in a persons life.
Many people who became achieved celebrity status from beginning of their childhood faced severe psychological issues in their later part of the life. The money and media attention intervened in their regular lifestyle cannot be maintained once their celebrity status fades away. Lack of social skills because of upbringing in secluded and restricted environment is another threat posed by becoming famous in small age. As financial management is not a job of children they might end up as bankrupt. Usually heavy income in young age will let them to spend on unethical habits like drinking, smoking and drugs.
On the other hand extra care taken by parents and guardian might turn this aspect into boon. Exposure and support for improving their talents in tender age will not only help to increase their confidence but also keep them upfront in modern world. Steady growth in their brilliance keeps psychological balance intact.
Hence, the problem is not becoming famous in young age but lack of skill to maintain balance in their life.Secret formula to enjoy success and fame from young age lies in taking precaution of overwhelmed joy and move on with their life after accepting failure. It is always to be reminded that key to happiness is not becoming famous but leading a content life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0694980695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.574001287 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2584057045 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150455007559 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496825875147 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056491193666 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911816843002 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547941338176 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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