Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Other’s think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is perceived that to live a life of merriment is what almost everybody wants; people have different views on which period of life brings more euphoria. While some presume that the adolescent stage is the most jovial times of our lives, others hold the concept that the full-grown individuals, despite advanced role, are happier. In my opinion, I would agree with the latter.
The role in the teenage years is indeed bounded between school and home since there is minimal accountability that is expected to comply, including passing the academics, graduating from secondary school and nothing much but help in the household chores. Although as easy as it sounds, it is also the age of impulsivity, raging hormones, and identity or role confusion. These age groups tend to do things without proper consideration that leads to unnecessary adverse consequences. Moreover, in these age span, they also experience challenges such as peer pressure, financial constraints due to dependency on their parents and thereby restricting their activities. In other words, the adolescence has more struggles and difficulties contrary to what other people believe.
On the other hand, with countless of things to define, life begins in adulthood. While responsibility gets huge and strenuous, it is the spurt of maturity, financial freedom and enhanced decision making hence the reason why they can handle things with grace and composure. For example, they can easily buy a plane ticket and travel the world or in unpleasant situations, they know how to handle their battles. Middle-aged individuals have more control over their life thus limiting, if not eliminate the negative consequences which means the chances of enjoying things in life are greater.
In conclusion, happiness can be more experienced when you have lesser troubles. In my opinion, adulthood has the key to achieve this state of joy and fun given the fact that it has lesser demerits than adolescence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29299363057 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142021877 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633757961783 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0627756838 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161769965177 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503204972869 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528637913577 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942086559871 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626019806904 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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