There are always debates about the importance of different subjects contributing to the development of society. While some people argue that subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History, I tend to believe that they are of the equal importance in the procedure.
History acts like a mirror to our modern life. To study history can provide a deep insight into our nation, culture and achievements today. As some experts declare, history will repeat itself in certain ways, which will be quite helpful to predict the future life by analyzing the structure and principles of the history.
Science and Technology contribute a lot in the fast growing of modern society, such as the invention of electricity, new types of vehicles, technologies applied to medical research, especially the internet. The electricity has changed the ever-lasting methods of manufacture and farming. Modern transportation makes it possible to travel farther places and in a shorter time. New cures are developed because of scientific means of medical experiments. The introduction of internet in the recent history has connected the whole world more tightly. All these outcomes thanks to the improvement of science and technology.
Besides, the History and Science and Technology are not isolated from each other, since new inventions are based on the efforts in history. In this case, History can offer basis and guiding direction for science and technology, while science and technology could extend the influence of history. After all, today will become a part of history in some day.
In conclusion, I hold the opinion that these subjects above should be treated equally and can be combined together for the good of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, while, after all, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83753719047 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0892297193 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282620523703 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829608292307 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837387989219 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148220898237 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976567805651 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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