More and more people are using computer and other electronic devices to access information.So printing of books, magazine and newspaper should be done.
Discussion both views and give your opinion.
In modern era, technology is rapidly growing in 21st century. Now generation using more and more computer and other electric gadgets. However, majority of people decrease uses of books, newspaper and magazine. In this essay discuss both views with some example.
On the one hand, technology takes the position of paper based reading materials. Nowadays people use cell phone and laptop's and also other technical gadgets. First cardinal advantage it is reducing efforts from their task through technology, people who is are professional, Also save time by it. For example, people who is are account, data typer, they might be helpful in their professional because reduced calculation and typing. Another upcoming advantage is that, Technology is also used in educational sector. Today's world, Classrooms are converting in virtual classrooms. For instance, Students who are belonged to remote area, they can be access virtual classroom through using technology. As result of technology is very vital tools, which through access any kind of information any corner of the world.
On the other hand, papers based reading materials are also important. The obvious reason is that, people who are old ages and senior citizens.They can not be easily to access information by technology. They might be . Helpful books and newspapers and magazines. Another important reason, which is I consider technology is not working in remote area, people are accessing information via paper based material.As result of certain level technology useful but books and newspaper are also useful.
To sum up, Scientist gives technology, it is god gift. Technology is important nowadays but also books, magazines and newspaper are also essential in today's.
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| 2019-09-25 | nirav malaviya | 33 | view |
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- Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do agree or disagree? 78
- Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do agree or disagree? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70539419087 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95119153102 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.4593494645 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231312108093 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937357469575 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738356402076 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154211509721 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831002732029 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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