Some people believe that the good leaders ar eborn, whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life. Who represents the good leader qualities indeed?
Leadership plays a vital role in the success of a business.it is often argued by some individuals that leadership is a god-gifted trait.However ,at the same time ,a body of opinion claims that there are some more characterstics which are essential for enhancing it.this essay would discuss both point of views in posterior paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is undeniable fact that few people are good since birth in getting their word done through guiding others.To clarify this ,some individuals have no need to do a particular leadership course in order to enhance skilld as they are already outstanding leaders.A research carried on this topic also reveals that offsprings of parents, having business background, are much better in leadership when compared with other children.Therefore, it is considered that leadership is a by birth quality.
On the other hand ,there are also some more convincing arguments regarding this notion that few more more factors effect leadership.Although, some individuals are good in leading teams from birth, traits like intelligence, motivation and education have major impacts.In other words, as everyone knows that a student who is good in his academic study based on the principles of leadership usually become good leader.Not only this, motivation and intelligence also effect the leadership because students who are willing to achieve a position of leader in companies will do hard work and the intelligent one can easily became leader through his/her intelligence and passion towards leadership.For an instance, there are many politicians who became leader after intense hardwork.
In conclusion, although some people have leadership qualities since birth, others can also gain it through the education and by working hard.Therefore, the second point of view has more convincing reasons and individuals can achieve their goal to become leader even if they do not have these qualities from birth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49668874172 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14030868373 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.89456455 49.4020404114 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 415.0 106.682146367 389% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.5 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243212350433 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138671391324 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576049224325 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138671391324 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576049224325 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.2 13.0946893788 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 50.2224549098 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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