We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that our abilities are limited and we should only help those who live in the vicinity. In my opinion, I can relate to the argument of only taking care of our communities, but I believe we should help those in other countries as well.
On the one hand, I understand that it is important to help residents in our communities. In every neighborhood, we can find people that are impoverished or disadvantaged. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, even in the wealthiest districts, and for people who are concerned, there are opportunities to volunteer time or donate money to support them. As the problems are on our doorstep and there are obvious ways to help them, it is easy to understand why we should prioritize on local charity
On the other hand, we should extend our help beyond national borders for many reasons. First, it is morally wrong to turn a blind eye on others’ suffering simply because they live far away from us. I believe the feeling of compassion is the common emotion for all human. Second, every national is connected in this era of globalization. The tragedy that falls in other countries will likely affect the lives of many domestic residents. For example, the refugees who escaped into the European Union are causing lots of social unrest. Had the world worked together to bring peace in the middle east, then EU members would not need to worry about the refugee problem. Lastly, there are many channels which the public can utilize to help other countries. With the internet, citizens can donate money to under-developed countries with a click of the mouse. The geological distance is not an excuse for us to turn our back to the suffering citizens overseas.
In conclusion, it is reasonable to prioritize on helping the local community, however, we should also give our hands to other nations whenever we can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, lastly, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87577639752 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76263489035 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3874542382 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242887566382 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765989182462 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746192267781 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168022553776 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368937297872 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.