The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...doing more physical activity than women.Finally there is a slight difference between me...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...doing more physical activity than women.Finally there is a slight difference between me...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... of 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 respectively. Finally it rose to 46.7% with age of 65 and abo...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing by men with age of 15 to 24 is 47.7% .Moreover it is increased to 48.9% and 52...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...g by men with age of 15 to 24 is 47.7% .Moreover it is increased to 48.9% and 52.5% with...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...g by men with age of 15 to 24 is 47.7% .Moreover it is increased to 48.9% and 52.5% with...
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Suggestion: .
...ng the highest percentage of 53.3 in2010 .After it shows decreasing trend of 53% a...
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Suggestion: After
... the highest percentage of 53.3 in2010 .After it shows decreasing trend of 53% and 47...
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Suggestion: .
...% and 47% with age of 55 to 64 and above .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13432835821 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44807361112 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427860696517 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7625669241 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316044327397 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164587679378 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127368063053 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25990391074 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135177429071 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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