Your brother cannot come on a trip that you planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to join instead. Please say– Where and when do you plan to go?– Why can’t your brother come?– Give a short description of the trip.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ai in order to explore famous beaches of Marine lines and the huge shopping marke...
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Line 9, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
... huge shopping market at Mumbai Central.Even our journey is on Sunday of coming wee...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...Central.Even our journey is on Sunday of coming week after 5 days as we both did ...
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...ve any particular schedule. However,my brother had a call from my father,aski...
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Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...icular schedule. However,my brother had a call from my father,asking him to ...
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Line 13, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , asking
...er,my brother had a call from my father,asking him to accompany Delhi on account of ce...
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Line 13, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ccount of certain emergency in business.Moreover, my brother had a project ,pending sinc...
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Line 13, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...iness.Moreover, my brother had a project ,pending since long ,to complete for his ...
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Line 13, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...rother had a project ,pending since long ,to complete for his graduation at New de...
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Line 13, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...mplete for his graduation at New delhi. Hence he has no chance to join me. What ...
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Line 17, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , firstly
...ce to join me. What is more, we are,firstly, moving to Mumbai from our hometown Ba...
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Line 17, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...stly, moving to Mumbai from our hometown Baroda in the train tomorrow night.Secon...
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Line 17, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Secondly
...own Baroda in the train tomorrow night.Secondly,after reaching there, we've to tra...
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Line 17, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , after
...oda in the train tomorrow night.Secondly,after reaching there, we've to travel ev...
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Line 17, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , which
...s;ve to travel everywhere in a hired car,which is already booked.Will return back to ...
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Line 17, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Will
... in a hired car,which is already booked.Will return back to our home within 3 days ...
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Line 17, column 209, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
... hired car,which is already booked.Will return back to our home within 3 days by flight fr...
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Line 17, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is already booked.Will return back to our home within 3 days by flight from...
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Line 25, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... me without any hesitation. Lots of love, Praveen Solanki
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Line 29, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Lots of love, Praveen Solanki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15697674419 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08420231958 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720930232558 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.124292081 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 4.34317383033 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113881335661 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485391350315 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541459430811 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655586095271 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627786850261 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.