When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that money is key when embarking on a career. I believe money is no longer important when basic human demands are fulfilled, and many other factors prevail over paychecks.
On the one hand, money is necessary in the sense that people need it to support their basic needs. For example, all of us need money to pay for food, bills, rents, education, and health care services. Citizens would prefer to earn a salary that can cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. if adults choose their career based on non-financial factors, they may find it difficult to make ends meet. Artists, for example, are known to choose the career they love, but that passion often does not provide them with enough income to support themselves and their families.
On the other hand, people have many pursuits other than money, and income becomes less relevant when compared against these factors. work-life balance, for instance, is crucial since we have responsibilities to families in addition to work. Some jobs pay well but they have long hours. It is not worth it to take such jobs if it means employees have to be separated from their families. Another important factor is the general vibe in the office. A positive, inclusive work environment will promote employees’ level of happiness whereas a hostile environment can lead to isolation and even depression. For me, happiness plays a vital role in my life so I will never sacrifice happiness for money
In conclusion, other factors such as quality of life and work environment are more important when our basic needs are satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... and have a reasonable quality of life. if adults choose their career based on non...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Work-life
...nt when compared against these factors. work-life balance, for instance, is crucial since...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9852398524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62700566297 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9882970916 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911037663751 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339544078823 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240481191397 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642904235826 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168772705667 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.