Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do you agree or disagree?
It is not uncommon to see teenagers helping the communities on a volunteer basis, and this is beneficial both to the individuals and the society. However, I do not agree with the idea of forcing them to do community services.
First of all, such a policy will certainly fatigue the younger generation. Teenagers are already under enough pressure with schools. Life in high schools is just as demanding as a full-time job. The teachers expect their student to do homework, exam revisions in addition to attending regular lectures. When teenagers do have spare time, they should spend it relaxing with friends and families, students have a life-time to work once they graduate.
Secondly, it is against the idea of a fair and free society if the government forced teenagers to do unpaid work. Every citizen should have the freedom to choose what to do when they are free. Forcing adolescents will surely cause resentment amongst youngsters who believe that they are being used as free labor, and parents, who do not want to be told how to raise their children. In worst-case scenario, citizens could riot and cause massive damage to society. Unlikely, no one is being forced to do any work now, and this is the best system.
In conclusion, I believe teenagers have the rights to choose what to do in their spare time, and forcing them to work is detrimental to the individual and society.
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 56
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer technology. It is used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. What will it be used for in future? Is this dependence on technology a good thing or should we be suspicious of its benefits? 84
- Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91596638655 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64881894263 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5018810287 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389404903691 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127444095911 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765937801607 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234640186675 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274900213153 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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