When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that money is key when embarking on a career. Personally, I believe above a certain threshold, money is less important than many other factors.
On the one hand, money is necessary in the sense that people need it to support their basic needs. For example, all of us need money to pay for food, bills, rents, and education and most people choose to earn a salary that can cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. if adults choose their career based on non-financial factors, they may find it difficult to make ends meet. Artists, for example, are known to choose the career they love, but that passion often does not provide them with enough income to support themselves and families.
On the other hand, people have many pursuits other than money, and income becomes less relevant when compared against these factors. work-life balance, for instance, is crucial since we have responsibilities to families in addition to work. Some jobs pay well but they have long hours. it is not worth it to take such jobs if it means we have to be separated from our families. Another important factor is the general vibe in the office. A positive, inclusive work environment will promote employees level of happiness whereas a hostile environment can lead to isolation and even depression. For me, happiness plays a vital role in my life so I will never sacrifice happiness for money
In conclusion, other factors such as quality of life and work environment are more important when our basic needs are satisfied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93155893536 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58490821794 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2439345523 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102625439517 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375273496542 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243694802034 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667880836077 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106478477488 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.