YOUR COMPANY RECENTLY USED A HOTEL FOR AN IMPORTANT MEETING. THERE WAS A PROBLEM WITH FACILITIES IN THE MEETING ROOM.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE HOTEL MANAGER: IN YOUR LETTER
- GIVE DETAILS ABOUT THIS MEETING
- DESCRIBE PROBLEM WITH THE MEETING ROOM FACILITIES
- SEE WHAT YOU WANT THE MANGER TO DO
Dear Mr. Manager,
I am writing to you tell that, I have attend meeting with my colleague last week in your hotel. this meeting is much important for me and my company but I am very disappointment from your side. Your hotel was brilliant but some problem come from your side. Your facilities is not good which I was expected. Our boss not happy with your hospitality. I am informing you some problems. First issue, your air conditioner cooling is very low. The second issue you have not give proper sitting area and washroom's condition is very poor. Your staff's behaviour is very disappointment.
you should follow my suggestion if you do this then in next month we have another meeting then definitely we will come in your hotel. I will not give you full payment, I will deduction amount from your bill.
Hope you will solve this all type of problems as soon as possible which I highlights. I shall be very thankful to you.
Your sincerely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...h my colleague last week in your hotel. this meeting is much important for me and my...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...very low. The second issue you have not give proper sitting area and washrooms condi...
^^^^
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...behaviour is very disappointment. you should follow my suggestion if you do t...
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Line 13, column 75, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'highlight'
Suggestion: highlight
...of problems as soon as possible which I highlights. I shall be very thankful to you. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74404761905 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60360708274 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3800777686 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3076923077 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283892631161 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103379298249 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745491320437 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159071947645 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105435450363 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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