With economies evolving faster than ever, there a lot of opportunities to make a good fortune out in the market. Nonetheless, the thing that decides to be on the right side of financial see-saw are the concepts of financing. I personally feel that learning such concepts at younger age might make easier for people is sustaining there after in their career. I will provide three reasons in support of my view which I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.
First of all, making money and managing it by oneself at a younger age is the most important teaching in the life. Utilizing our own money, which is made through hard work, preaches us many crucial aspects that encompass the financial bubble. This experience will be conducive when you actually start to live you own life. There are many critical things that have to be learned regarding finances, say saving, accounting, investing, etc., Having an experience of such things helps a lot in life. In other words, being good at these basic concepts, knowing them very well, and making the most out of them is all required to earn a lot of money. My personal example is a compelling example of this. During the final year of my under graduation, I started working part time in a small financing company. Consequently, the pay I received was less but the exposure that I had earned before the graduation was unfathomable. This has been very helpful in making a lot of money through savings and investing, not to mention that all the money has been earned through my avocation.
Secondly, managing family's finances during childhood and teenage also helps us a lot. The experience we gain is invaluable, which properly executed in future, leads to sustainable money flow over long period of time. Similarly, even observing parents at an early age may help attain some insights in these things. Moreover, you can do all other things while you perform such things with the assistance of your parents. Though practicing might appear onerous but in reality these are very facile. A very famous people named Rich Dad Poor Dad by renowned author Mark Twain, discerns the importance of learning financial concepts at an early age. In that memoir, the author himself has started practicing from very young age to become one of the youngest non-technological billionaires in the world.
Finally, we encounter many cases where rich kids suffer financially in their career. During childhood, such children having seen a lot of money and spending to their wish and not having learnt the concepts of frugality. This results in poor financial life after they had detached from their rich parents as they start their personal life. Although being thrifty might seem superficially simple, but have capacity to make you dissolute.
In conclusion, learning and practicing finances at an early age is very useful throughout one's life. Although every child might not have the possibility performing, still one could get the taste of it by observing other people executing such practices. On the other hand, many a lot books are available out their in the market or internet. Young people might ingest these books and start practicing as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2670.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98134328358 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67406658494 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513059701493 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 822.6 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3560633116 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46428571429 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188700145177 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491649487444 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315891068242 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105632174721 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270546262243 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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