The graph below shows the population figure for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the population figure for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Kamal1993 on Tue, 10/01/2019 - 00:50

The multi line graph illustrates the information about the four various kinds of turtles populace which was in twenty two years in India during 1980 and 2012. Units were measured in index*(1980=100).

In overall, olive Ridley turtles (20) constituted a major in population since Leatherback turtles (19) was least in populace. However, there were a lot of transformation can be noticed in populations of all turtles over the periods.

With regards, it can be seen from the information that Olive Ridley turtles were most popular in India with their vast amount of populace which in the first given year. Likewise, it increased dramatically and reached to peak at over 130 between 1982 and 1996. In contrast, it showing a fluctuating figure in the remaining periods in specific region. On the other hand, a steady inclined had experienced in the number of Leatherback turtle’s populations from 1980 to 1986 in particular nation. Interestingly, a figure of Leatherback turtle’s populace was following in up and down trend during the 1988 and 2012.

The graph further proves that in India, the number of Green turtles (38) as well as all species (111)’s populations can be observed at followed in zig zag ways. Similarly, Green turtles populace started from 100 in 1982 where it was continuously growing and falling accounted at not more than 100 in two decades. Lastly, the populace amount of all species noticed at over 100 in the bingeing of the period after this it were found 110 and 100 respectively in the last years in given country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-two
... kinds of turtles populace which was in twenty two years in India during 1980 and 2012. Un...
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Line 13, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at in India, the number of Green turtles 38 as well as all species 111's pop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, likewise, similarly, well, in contrast, in particular, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06614785992 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9317768672 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4514469528 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199083311682 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762304831679 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441053262104 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130226869155 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380466370677 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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