some people claims that people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet isgetting worse. critics says that these countries should change their diet.

Western foods such as fast food are now becoming unhealthy foods and this is causing the dietary ruins of people. Change their diet with low-fat is the most viable remedy that I suggested.

Chief among the causes of ruins the diet is the way people eat fast food as their daily diet and as a consequence of this consuming poor died the majority of people are getting a serious problem in health especially in obesity. According to the World Health Organization show that 80% of obesity people due to consuming fast food and also this shows that they contain high sodium saturated fat trans fat, and cholesterol. Although this causing several diseases, few people consistently eat this food because it is convenient to find and does not require more time.

More importantly, there is a strong relationship between poor diet and terrible disease, so this should be tackle by change poor diet style with low-fat died. By consuming healthy food diets, people more rarely get obesity because of the food contains high-density fats such a protein. As a result, due to protein has powerful effects on appetite, it can increase feelings of fullness. Research conducted by Oxford University shows that consuming food with high protein such as fish helped participants eat 200 fewer calories per day compared with junk food that has 300 calories. Even though this rule more complex for some people, overall they can receive health improvement.

In conclusion, although fast food was more convenient to found and cheaper for a few people, it leads to several health problems, so this should be solved with a health died lifestyle. Where possible, some stringent laws about food nutrition that can consume should be taken into consideration.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tackled'?
Suggestion: tackled
...and terrible disease, so this should be tackle by change poor diet style with low-fat ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06620209059 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60320955209 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9301250694 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162745165887 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699072747954 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682892007852 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110646034324 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047997774429 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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