In many countries, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a house with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes governments pay for this care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
As a good practice of treating old people elderly houses and villages operate in several developed countries such as New Zealand, Australia, Great Britain and United states. Other ones that are willing to adopt this practice passing through the controversial discussion either the government or relatives of the elderly facilities residents should be responsible for covering expenses of that service. this essay will discuss why I think that care about seniors is the responsibility of both sides and how it should be maintained from the financial point of view.
In order to move closer to an answer of recently raised financial question we have to figure out which exactly services elderly houses and villages provide to their residents. being a service engineer of peripheral devices, I had visited several elderly facilities and witnessed by my own eyes that the primary role of these houses and villages is to keep an eye for unstable medical conditions of the residents and provide everyday medical care for treatment and prophylactic purposes. The second supporting role of the elderly facilities is to entertain their wards and keep them in good spirits as far as it is important for physical health as well. Taking into account these facts, we can conclude that elderly houses and villages are the medical facilities where people stay longer than in usual hospitals and that is why elderly facilities should be considered as a part of state health care system and sponsored by the government respectively.
moving forward in investigation of the financial question, we must mention a significant difference between elderly houses and elderly villages. Whereas, both have the same medical services in common, focus of villages is mainly shifted to a high level of resident's comfort and entertaining events. The customers of elderly villages are being provided by luxury apartments with latest technology equipment. Leisure time of retired people in elderly villages is permanently fulfilled with multiple fun and interesting activities which performed not only inside the village but travelling around the country is not a rare offer in the list of village's services. Obviously, residence in elderly villages exceeding the scope of government's obligations and requires additional funding apart from government's sponsorship.
In conclusion, leaning on revealed facts above, I want to say that main responsibility about health of our seniors must be taken by the government and every retired person as a former tax payer is in his or her rights of getting necessary care in an elderly facility. but in case of chasing an improvement of life conditions apart from health recovery it is logical to expect additional expenses from customer's pocket.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33409610984 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88708479304 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535469107551 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8026248091 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.5 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2142857143 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166581185876 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591737996162 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422689499425 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106340627329 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568118131632 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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