In our modern world, education empowers minds that will be able to conceive good thoughts and ideas. Nowadays people educational background is considered one of the greatest priorities to many administrations. All mentioned features at above shows the importance of the education in our life. Everyone (especially kids) deserve to be educated in any situation. But: Is it acceptable that children instead of going to school, be educated by their parents at their home?
In the past most of the children were educated in their house and mostly their parents were their tutors. But nowadays in most country’s education policy say that; children should only go to the school to gain knowledge.for example in my country Iran, children are not allowed to educate in their house (specially by their parents)
This policy in education can have many positive aspects, the following are some of them: Children at school in addition to learning to read and write, they learn how to act with their classmates, teachers, … they also learn some important skills of life for their future which in their homes can never learn. For instance, they learn how to communicate with their friends, how to cooperate with together to solve the problems.
In my opinion these skills are much more important for future of children (and these are the effects that proved by researchers). In other words we can say schools are literally same as small case of community for the students.
All positive impacts of going school for children that has said at above, Illustrate the importance of this issue that most of the researchers emphasizes that. But on the other hand homeschooling (educating child by his parent at home), can have some other positive influence for students, like as: firstly, determine the curriculum and child schooling schedule. Secondly, parents can demonstrate to their child that how fun can be the education. And thirdly, parents can provide more convenient environment than school. Furthermore, parents sometimes find themselves in situations where they are forced to educate their children at home. For Example sometimes because of some illnesses children cannot go to school so in the situations like this there is no choice except homeschooling.
To sum up, in my opinion, its clear that advantages of going school for education outweigh the advantages of homeschooling. And in normal condition it would be better child go to school for gaining knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...eir parents at their home? In the past most of children were educated in their house and mostly...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...were their tutors. But nowadays in most countries education policy say that; children sho...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this policy' or 'These policies'?
Suggestion: This policy; These policies
...their house specially by their parents These policy in education can has many positive aspe...
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Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... parents These policy in education can has many positive aspects, the following ar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...w to act with their classmates, teachers,… they also learn some important skills o...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'an'?
...h together to solve the problems and so an. In my opinion these skills are much mo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... child that how fun can be the education Parents can provide more convenient envi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... more convenient environment than school . Furthermore, parents sometimes find th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80259726919 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502525252525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.898800581 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.6875 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0419655761635 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170937930485 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0128837603414 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0179422076884 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134786630547 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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