One-fifth of the children in western civilization, in the last decade, have put on extra weight. This essay will mainly focus on two areas: causes of this issue, which consists of growing trend of not only high consumption of fast-foods but also interest towards virtual games; and its solutions, which includes encouraging our coming generation for switching back to both outdoor sports and eating healthy.
A number of factors can be held responsible for the above problem. Firstly, people prefer to eat only for taste these days. Because Mc Donalds and Dominos have opened in every corner of modern cities, the interest of society is shifting from homemade food to such junk food, and it is leading to high consumption of harmful oils. Moreover, children are spending long hours on video games, instead of going out and enjoying in actual playgrounds. By doing so, they do not burn the calories and just become couch potatoes. Therefore, high consumption of calories and lesser activities are the two root causes of this issue.
Still, the above negative fashion can be controlled in different ways. To begin with, we all know home-cooked food never makes one obese, so we must educate the children for opting it over fast foods. It has less harmful ingredients than the one available in restaurants and at streets. In addition to this, both burning of fat and getting sweat is also very essential to keep oneself in shape. If one goes outside and spend some time in playing with friends, then he will surely shed the extra pounds he has gained at home.
In conclusion, although due to the above-mentioned reasons, indubitably, issue of weight gain has increased in the western world recently, the same can be tackled by spreading awareness about taking nutritional diet and promoting physical activities.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 % in the last ten years. Discuss the possible its causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution. 89
- Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree 89
- It is seen that older adults are not given enough respect and facilities in many countries What could be the reason for this What are effects of this 91
- in recent times, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do shopping. is this the positive development or negative? 73
- Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65890342846 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.463784058 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106674826368 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304914928921 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356674519879 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063803297227 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431524305468 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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