Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree?

Submitted by Roshanip on Fri, 10/04/2019 - 08:34

In recent years, whether women should be given equal chances to work as men or not sparked heated debate. Although such an issue is contested by many, it is regarded thoroughly both sides by a substantial number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that women should be given equal chances to work and excel, and I will elaborate in this essay.

To begin with, some people argue that the woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Women should not do any external activities like job, business or any other activities that make them independent. This is one of the worst social-environmental evil. There are many reasons, which are to be blamed for it. Firstly, these narrow-minded people think if women go for work, then who will take care of home and children is the main issue. For example, a women do the job can't give attention to their children and home.

On the other hand, nowadays women become more capable and independent. They are employed in almost most of the work, which is previously only men do. Women are now thinking about their carrier and make it their priority by taking care of the house. They can perform both responsibilities very efficiently. According to a survey held by Employees Service Committee (ESC), 48% of total employees are women on average in any organization.

In Conclusion, in my opinion, Women must be given equal rights and chances to enhance their carrier. We cannot deny their efficiency and importance in any organization.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...hildren is the main issue. For example, a women do the job cant give attention to their...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ldren is the main issue. For example, a women do the job cant give attention to their...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... issue. For example, a women do the job cant give attention to their children and ho...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88846153846 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85945695593 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9110613154 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4375 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509059865028 0.242375264174 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137989082395 0.0925447433944 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130386442264 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265103765745 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939098527514 0.0609392437508 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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